words and pictures part 2: storyboard

Feedback:
– The   words on the “meaning, meaning, what it even means” isn’t clear to see.
– If the words “ without” is intentionally with a space making it two words.
– Why it’s a unicorn not religion.
– The purpose of the animation.
– if it was supposed to be the comedy .
– That the red on black text for the word “pointless “does not go well. And if that’s the meaning of the animation it needs to be more.

In conclusion: change backgrounds, colours of fonts  and make sure its spelt “without” in the animation.

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